?

Log in

No account? Create an account

Previous Entry | Next Entry

Aftermath

Title: Aftermath
Rating: G
Pairing: Maedhros/Fingon
Genre: Drabble



He was sleeping now. The draught would hold the pain at bay for a few hours. Not that he ever complained, but Maedhros could see the torment in his eyes and he suffered. The wounds of a lover were far more injurious than wounds to oneself.

His lashes lay dark against his too pale cheeks, brow furrowed in determination in his troubled slumber. So beautiful. So valiant. And all his, for as long as the fates granted.

Maedhros stroked his silken hair. Fingon opened those brilliant blue eyes and fixed him with a loving smile.

“You look tired,” he said.

Comments

( 23 comments — Leave a comment )
heartofoshun
Dec. 9th, 2012 02:48 am (UTC)
I love this! What are friends for if not to help one out when one is feeling unwell. Thank you.
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 02:51 am (UTC)
A minor diversion but every little bit helps. I hope you're feeling better soon. *hugs*

Edited at 2012-12-09 02:52 am (UTC)
heartofoshun
Dec. 9th, 2012 02:58 am (UTC)
Thank you.
(Deleted comment)
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 03:51 am (UTC)
Thanks! *hugs back*
moetushie
Dec. 9th, 2012 04:18 am (UTC)
Aw, that was sweet.
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 04:20 am (UTC)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
drummerwench
Dec. 9th, 2012 04:36 am (UTC)
Oh, that was so nice! And what a great thing for cheering up Oshun!
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 04:39 am (UTC)
Thanks! I know it sucks to be sick this time of year and she always cheers me up so I wanted to return the favor. :-)
elfscribe5
Dec. 9th, 2012 05:52 am (UTC)
That was absolutely gorgeous. And I'm afraid I can relate to this completely. What a lovely present for Oshun!
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 07:52 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! Oshun said she wanted some hurt/comfort and this is the first thing that came to mind. I know you can relate to this probably better than anyone. I really appreciate your comments. *hugs*
hhimring
Dec. 9th, 2012 11:13 am (UTC)
What a lovely inversion! Maedhros comforting Fingon rather than the other way around. Nice.
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Himring. I didn't think about the role reversal when I wrote it, I was just trying to stay close to Oshun's take on the characters. I'm glad you liked it.
spiced_wine
Dec. 9th, 2012 11:53 am (UTC)
This is lovely, Marius. I can't think of any better way of cheering some-one up.
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:30 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Sian. I'm glad you like it. I'm always good for a drabble. :-)
just_jenni
Dec. 9th, 2012 03:28 pm (UTC)
This was a really lovely exchange of feelings. Pure love at its best. :)
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much. I'm glad their love came through in such few words.
nelyo_russandol
Dec. 9th, 2012 05:55 pm (UTC)
The wounds of a lover were far more injurious than wounds to oneself.

That, coming from Maedhros, means much. Interesting that you chose to reverse their roles. Lovely scene, shows their intimacy so well...

Edited at 2012-12-09 05:57 pm (UTC)
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Russa. I didn't think of it as a role reversal when I wrote it, I just figured Maedhros had been comforted so much it was Fingon's turn. :-)
nelyo_russandol
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:39 pm (UTC)
I didn't think of it as a role reversal when I wrote it

I didn't mean for real, but just in the way that it's traditionally Maedhros being take care of by Fingon.
minuial_nuwing
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:16 pm (UTC)
(Followed the trail from Oshun's place!)

This is lovely. You have packed a lot of poignancy and a feeling of real depth into your one hundred words. *g*
ignoblebard
Dec. 9th, 2012 08:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Drabbles can be difficult sometimes but this one just kind of wrote itself. I appreciate your comments.
pandemonium_213
Dec. 9th, 2012 11:22 pm (UTC)
Hat's off to you for writing a form that I consider THE most difficult out there. At least, a form done right, and this one is.

Edited at 2012-12-09 11:23 pm (UTC)
ignoblebard
Dec. 10th, 2012 03:50 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, Pande, I'm glad you like this one. Drabbles are always a fun challenge. I can't write a novel but when I try to write a drabble I can't seem to shut up. :-)
( 23 comments — Leave a comment )